Before the Epic Began.
King Dasaratha felt so lucky to have his four sons if it
would not have been for the Sage Rishya Sringa, he might have died never having
any children. Since Dasartha was an older father, he enjoyed watching the boys
play and interact together while they were little from afar.
Rama was the eldest and usually made the decisions but never
felt he had power over the others and the other brothers had a respect for him.
Bharatha was the second and very honorable, but his mother always kept a close
eye on him. And last, were the twins Lakshmana and Sathrugna, even though they
were twins that were entirely different from each other. Lakshmana enjoyed
playing with Rama the most, and you would almost think that they had been born
the twins. Sathrugna on the other hand, preferred his studies and did not enjoy
the company of others and would go off on his own to meditate. Dasaratha had a
feeling that these traits would play a hand in each of the boys' future. On one
particular day, the boys had all finished their lessons for the day and went
outside to play together.
Lakshmana looked like he wanted to shoot his bow around but
first asked Rama what he wanted to play. "Rama what should we play
today?" Asked Lakshmana.
Rama looked around then already knowing that Lakshmana
preferred to play with the bows replied, "I am happy to play whatever game
we all decide on, but I think I would like to play a shooting game with the
bows?"
Lakshmana laughed, Rama always knew what he was thinking.
"Okay but only if you want to too? Are you two going to play?"
Lakshmana asked his two other brothers.
Bharatha readily agreed, but Sathrugna declined and went to
sit under a tree to watch. "Yes, it will be fun to practice our shooting,
count me in," Bharatha told Rama and Lakshmana.
The three brothers began to shoot their arrows towards the
targets. Rama had the best shot, but Lakshmana came in a very close second.
After playing around for a while, Bharatha mother Kaikeyi came to call Bharatha
away. Even though he did not want to go Bharatha went away with his mother
because he knew it was the right thing to do.
Once Bharatha left Rama and Lakshmana were left to play
together just the two of them. It seemed that this pattern, of only the two
bothers getting to play together, played out for most of their lives with the
Rama and Lakshmana becoming closer as they got older.
Author’s Note: This story is based off of the story The Ramayana by R.K. Narayan. In the story of The Ramayana we learn about King Dasaratha
who has four sons. The book only briefly describes the four sons as children
and then skips ahead to when Rama and Lakshmana leave with Viswamithra to help
protect him against rakshasa. I decide to write a story that gives a little
more information about the childhood of the boys. I wanted to show that Rama
and Lakshmana became close when they were little and then how Bharatha wanted
to play with them too but his mother always seemed to pull him away. This is parallel
to how the boys are when they grow up and how Bharatha mother makes him look
like the bad guy even though he wants Rama to be King not himself. I decided to
have Sathrugna not participate because in the book it seems like he does not
want to get involved with anything and is just a quiet bystander that is barely
mentioned. I hope you have enjoyed my story and would love to hear feedback!
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Image: Four brothers playing around. Source: pixabay by blueMix
Hi Ashley, I love this story. I think it such a fun idea to make up how the brothers interacted as children. I always enjoy hearing how people grew up and how they were raised. I am sure there has to be a story of the four boys growing up somewhere and I would love to read it. You did an amazing job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your take on backstory! I've noticed, too, that a lot is brushed over without much explanation in our readings, so it's cool to explore what might've happened despite not being overtly explained.
ReplyDeleteI might take this idea, too, for some of the things that I was curious about but that didn't have enough explanation. Some of the characters in the stories seem really interesting, but get basically no focus (like the vulture god who tried to save Sita from Ravana).
Great work!